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Nianev and Peol


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Nia

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Name: Nianev (NEE-uh-nehv)
Other Aliases: Nia, The Sun Goddess' Daughter, Ranpoo
Gender: Female
Race: Gerudo
Archetype: Martial Artist
Nationality: Hyrulean
Health: 45
Defense:11
Stats
  • Strength: 2
  • Agility: 3
  • Intelligence: 3
  • Magic: 2
  • Charisma: 3
Skills
  • Striking: 2
  • Brawling: 2
  • Endurance: 1
  • Athletics: 2
  • Ranged Combat: 2
  • Defensive Combat: 2
  • Medicine: 0
  • Puzzles: 2
  • Spells: 0
  • Casting: 0
  • Potions: 0
  • Magical Item Use: 0
  • Sincerity: 4
  • Inspiration: 0
  • Natural Affinity: 0

Perks and Flaws Stealth (3), Luck (5); Magical Void (6), Pansy (2)

Weapon Type and Quality glaive, standard quality; bow, poor quality; dual blades, moderately poor quality.

Physical Description: Nia's of an average Gerudo height, with typical red hair, dark skin, and a pointed nose. She wears a black breastband with red borders, black Gerudo balloon pants with red borders and a red Gerudo Symbol. She wears black slippers, and golden jewelery, most of which has the Gerudo Symbol on it. Her long hair is in two ponytails. She wears the traditional Gerudo makeup.

Personality:She's rather serious, loyal and steadfast, but, living the life of a theif and con-artist, she covers her own personality with a playful, naive and cheerful façade. She doesn't know how to relate to people well. She is often sarcastic and cynical, when she's being herself, and she's a 'man hater'. She doesn't hate men, per se, but it would take a man with excellent fighting prowess to earn her respect.

Family: Her mother raised her in the Hyrulian Fortress ruins, because she detested the Termina Gerudo. Not much is known about her mother beyond that, and absolutely nothing is known about her father. Peol, a 'Mad' Scrub, accompanies her, and she views him as a sort of brother.

Magical Talents: None whatsoever.

Weapons and Talents: She has a standard glave, an old and worn longbow, and a pair of dual-blades passed down from her ancestors. They are on the old side, and so are not quality weapons, though she takes good care of them.

Strengths and Weaknesses: She is a proffessional thief and con artist, known for her silver tongue. She is busty, and attractive, which she utilizes. She is kind-hearted. Though she's quick and nimble, she can't take a hit well. She will also do anything to help Peol, and an enemy can readily take advantage of that, since he cannot spit Deku Nuts. She also has no magical capabilities or defense. She
can be pretty close-minded; especially when it comes to Termina Gerudo.

History: She was born and raised in the Gerudo Ruins, as her mother despised the Termian Gerudo, claiming that they had turn their backs on the Sun Goddess, and on who they once were, as a race. Nia learned this opinion from her. They kept their residency in the fortress a secret, not liking strangers, and so Nia didn't know much about iteraction with other people. Other Gerudo also lived with them, but they were very few. Eventually, Nia found herself feeling stifled by her surroundings, and left home. She practised her theivery, as her mother had taught her, and used her excellent charisma to get away with a lot. She has a habit of convincing people to 'give' things to her, so that, after she escapes, they cannot legally say that she stole the item. Many people distrust her on sight, seeing that she is a Gerudo, but she convinces them that she is harmless... before pouncing. On one of her frequent visits home, she came across a mad scrub wandering the desert. She discovered that he, Peol, was severely depressed, suicidal, and self-loathing, because he couldn't spit deku nuts, and was thus worthless. She managed to convince him that he had value, and from then on, he accompanied her wherever she went. She quickly grew to value his company, and beleives him to be family. She's managed to convince some people that she is the daughter of the Sand Goddess, just because, and to practise her lying. She occasionally takes the name of Ranpoo, and disguises herself, also for fun and practise.

Spells: None whatsoever, besides her dashing good looks.

Edited by Nia, 11 November 2011 - 02:26 PM.


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Umbra

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By my calculations, you have 15 XP points left. You need to spend XP until you only have 2 points left. Hopefully you know how XP is spent. If you don't know, refer here.

Post here again once you've made your edits.

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Nia

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I've corrected it. I should only have 1 exp.

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Umbra

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Now by my calculations, you're at -14 points, which is a big no-no. Raising Intelligence to 3 would already use up your 15 remaining XP. So adding anything to your skills puts you over the limit.

You have two options here. Either keep your Intelligence at 3 and lower your skills accordingly, or keep your stats the way they are and lower your Intelligence stat, but those may need to be adjusted, too. Take your pick.

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Nia

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I see what happened. I had intelligence 3 in the first place. You seemed to have missed that, and thus, it appeared that I was 15 points above. I've returned it to it's original state.

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Ok, I'm an idiot. Take it from me, never check these things in the dead of night. Anyway, all your points check out.

APPROVED. Have fun!

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Health: 45
Defense:11
Stats:
Strength: 2
Agility: 3
Intelligence: 3
Magic: 2
Charisma: 3

Skills:
Striking: 2
Brawling: 2
Endurance: 1
Athletics: 2
Ranged Combat: 2
Defensive Combat: 2
Medicine: 0
Puzzles: 2
Spells: 0
Casting: 0
Potions: 0
Magical Item Use: 0
Sincerity: 4
Inspiration: 0
Natural Affinity: 0

Perks and Flaws: Stealth (3), Luck (5); Magical Void (6), Pansy (2)





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