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#1
Razer Kuris

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Name: Razer Kuris
Other Aliases:
Gender:Male
Race: Hylian
Archetype: Tank
Nationality:Hyrulean
Stats
  • Strength: 3
  • Agility: 2
  • Intelligence: 2
  • Magic: 3
  • Charisma: 2

Skills 35+6 (from flaws)=41-3 from tough= 38
  • Striking: 3 (32 left)
  • Brawling: 2 (29)
  • Endurance: 3 (23)
  • Athletics: 2 (20)
  • Ranged Combat: 0
  • Defensive Combat: 3 (14)
  • Medicine: 2 (11)
  • Puzzles: 0
  • Spells: 0
  • Casting: 0
  • Potions: 0
  • Magical Item Use: 0
  • Sincerity: 3 (8)
  • Inspiration: 3 (2)
  • Natural Affinity: 3

Perks and Flaws

Flaws:
Self Non-preservation(3)
Driven(3)- Driven to find the reason behind his families brutal murder and the story to his brothers disappearence.

Perks:
Tough(3/6)

Physical Description:
Age: 19
Height: 6‘2“
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Blonde
Body: medium build. Not bulky.
Clothing: Black Clothe sweater, grey chest gaurd over the sweater, black pants, black combat boots.


Personality: Silent, Strong-willed, Good natured, Helpful at times. Due to early conflicts Razer doesn‘t use any magic, even though he is Hylian; has a soft spot for children, and people in abusive situations. He believes everybody should be treated equally with respect.

Family:
Mother: Deceased
Father: Deceased
Brother: The name or location is unknown, but Razer believes he‘s still alive.
Magical Talents: None
Weapons and Talents: Steel Dagger concealed in his jacket, long two-handed sword, both fair quality.

Strengths and Weaknesses: Good at hand-to-hand combat and close quarters; determined in any fight to beat his opponent. Very bad at long ranged attacks.

History: Raised up on the outskirts of Hyrule, Razer had an easy life with his Mother, Father and older brother. Training for him was a regular thing, as far back as he could remember his brother was teaching him swordplay with any variation of a straight object. His older Brother was more of a father figure than his abusive father was, they had many similarities including the 'Z' shaped birthmark they shared individually on their cheeks. His brother defended him from the abuse taken by their father.

At the age of seven Razer was given a two-handed sword from his brother; he didn't quiet understand why as the weapon was to large for him to wield being that small.

What seems like a short year later Razer and his brother returned from a visit to the market only to find their parents on the brink of being executed by bandits. His older brother attempted to fight off the attackers and save his parents; it was a losing battle. The bandits were armed with long ranged weapons, beating the unarmed warrior without a challenge. Razer was hit in the head, leaving him with a concussion and very little memory of anything. Razer remembers waking up in the rain, his parents bodies decapitated, leaving him emotionally dead. These events motivated Razer to get better, and to never give up.

Eleven years after everything he had was stripped away from him, Razer took the easiest path possible, he took a job working under a blacksmith. Recieving good pay his life was getting put back together piece by piece; the pain of the past fading from his mind.

One unfortunate day he noticed a birthmark similar to the one he and his brother shared from a customer showing a worn out face, trial written over his body language. Believing this was his brother, Razer departed from his life of luxury in search of answers. He vowed to never quit until he found out the truth, even if it took his life to know.

Spells:
None.

#2
Umbra

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I see what you did with the numbers in parentheses next to your skill points, but it looks like you counted your own points wrong. You didn't go over your allotted amount. You're actually sitting at 2 points. Not bad.

However, before I can approve it, can you do two things for me?

1. Can you give a general description of what he wears in his appearance? We don't want him running around in the nude now! XD
2. Expand a bit on his personality. We have a few characters like what's in your personality section. What makes his attitude stand out in a crowd?

Get back to me in this thread once you've made your edits, and I'll give it another look.

#3
Razer Kuris

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I fixed it.

#4
Umbra

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Eh, good enough for me. Approved. Have fun!

Quote

Archetype: Tank
Nationality:Hyrulean

HP: 90
Defense: 18

Stats
Strength: 3
Agility: 2
Intelligence: 2
Magic: 3
Charisma: 2


Skills 35+6 (from flaws)=41-3 from tough= 38
Striking: 3 (32 left)
Brawling: 2 (29)
Endurance: 3 (23)
Athletics: 2 (20)
Ranged Combat: 0
Defensive Combat: 3 (14)
Medicine: 2 (11)
Puzzles: 0
Spells: 0
Casting: 0
Potions: 0
Magical Item Use: 0
Sincerity: 3 (8)
Inspiration: 3 (2)
Natural Affinity: 3


Perks and Flaws

Flaws:
Self Non-preservation(3)
Driven(3)

Perks:
Tough(3/6)


#5
Razer Kuris

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Thank You!




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