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[Dretta]

Name: Iza Do Bon
Other Aliases:
Gender: Female
Race: Zora
Archetype: mage
Nationality: Hyrule

Stats

• Strength: 2
  
• Agility: 3
  
• Intelligence: 2
  
• Magic: 3
  
• Charisma: 2

Skills

• Striking: 0
  
• Brawling: 0
  
• Endurance: 0
  
• Athletics: 0
  
• Ranged Combat: 2 (3)
  
• Defensive Combat: 2 (3)
  
• Medicine: 0
  
• Puzzles: 0
  
• Spells: 3 (3)
  
• Casting: 4 (9)
  
• Potions: 2
  
• Magical Item Use: 4 (7)
  
• Sincerity: 0
  
• Inspiration: 0
  
• Natural Affinity: 0

Perks and Flaws

Weak (3)
Frail(2):

Self Non Preservation(3):

Iconic Item greater(8): Hookshot.

Nobility (6)

Prodigy(4): Magical items.

Appearance:
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Iza is a rare breed of Zora who instead of a head-tail she has an actual tail used to propel herself under water and even as a possible weapon. Her nobility plays a role in her looks showing her difference from the lesser classes.

Personality: Iza is a quiet sort who only at rare times will raise her voice or become irrational. She is a quick thinker, but can be oblivious when deep in thought or too focused in combat. she never gives in during a fight and this has resulted in a few near deaths for the zora. She enjoys music and believes the rivers produce the best music. Her nobility has taught her to be distant from people but never be an out right snob.


Family: The Do Bon family is highly known for their weapon skill in use of boomerangs but females have at times learned the way of lightening and ice magic. Most males join as royal guards giving the family a 'knight noble' statis. blood relations go as dead mother elder father seven brothers all older and all them serve as zora guards.

Magical Talents: her talent is focused on the elemental force of ice.

Spells: Ice blast: range 10 feet, causes a permafrost coating on the target which causes a painful burning sensation.
frost fang: a frozen projectile made from the water in the air. useless in dry hot areas.
winter step: used to freeze the ground and or water when stepped upon. water freezes over for no more than 2 turns.

Weapons and Talents: hookshot: used primarily as a last ditch effort and protection in close quarters situations as well as a way to escape.

Strengths and weakness Her body is physically weak but she makes up for it with her strong use in magic and the occasional hookshot to the fave. her inability to backdown from a fight has caused her much trouble, but after every near death she gains more knowledge for the future

History:

[Umbra]

As far as your points are concerned, you have spent 36/35 points. You need to edit your points so that they either check out evenly, or you have up to 2 left over.

Also, I am sorry to say that an image link and an extremely shoddy description do not constitute an Appearance.

Fix these things, and finish your history, and you'll be up for approval.