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Yseult

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(OoC: Just so people know this is Joscelin.)

Name: Yseult Emile Stregazza
Other Aliases: Emile
Gender: Female
Age: 26
Race: Human
Archetype: Blademaster

Strength + 1
Striking + 2
Defensive Combat + 2
Potions + 2

Nationality: Hyrulean

Stats
  • Strength: 3 (Archtype + 1)
  • Agility: 2
  • Intelligence: 3 ( Race +1)
  • Magic: 2
  • Charisma: 2
Skills
Total = 35
  • Striking: 4 (-7 exp)
  • Brawling: 0
  • Endurance: 3 ( -6 exp)
  • Athletics: 0
  • Ranged Combat: 0
  • Defensive Combat: 4 ( -7 exp)
  • Medicine: 0
  • Puzzles: 2 ( -3 exp)
  • Spells: 0
  • Casting: 0
  • Potions: 2
  • Magical Item Use: 0
  • Sincerity: 0
  • Inspiration: 0
  • Natural Affinity: 0
Perks and Flaws

Flaws:
Frail (+ 2)

Perks:
Rich ( -3)
Iconic Item ( -4) Lesser- Gilded Sword
Dual Wielding ( -7)

Total = 0

Physical Description:
Height: 5’ 6”
Eyes: Icy blue
Hair: Yseult keeps her wavy, light brown hair cut slightly above her shoulders. Normally leaving it down, she at times has been known to tie it up into a ponytail.
Build: Slender and well toned, Yseult’s body has only the slightest of womanly curves.
Clothing: Yseult’s clothes are simple but of great quality. Her shirt is a dark maroon red with long sleeves. Over this she wears a black leather cuirass, the leather gauntlets that cover her hands and forearms match her cuirass. Dark navy blue pants, cover her lower half, tucked into mid-calf black leather boots.
Personality: Cold and intelligent, she strives to control her own destiny. Her straightforward and blunt nature keeps many people away. Yseult holds a firm control over her emotions not letting them affect her. As such she a very calm person and unusually understandable on what motivates a person's action, however, coupled with her harsh experiences she is still quite brutal.
Family: Yseult’s parents died while she was still a toddler. As such she does not remember much about them. She does remember, however, her older brother, Tal, that helped raise her on the streets for a few years before abandoning her for his own survival.
Magical Talents:

Weapons and Talents: Yseult is a skilled fighter able to use an assortment of one handed weapons, and coordinated enough to dual wield them as well. Her favored weapon are scimitars. She travels with two of the curved blades crisscrossing her back.

Strengths and Weaknesses: Despite Yseult being a deadly fighter, her small frame is not capable of taking much of a beating.

History:
Orphaned at a young age Yseult’s first memories are of hardship, hunger, and helplessness in the slums of Hyrule Castle City. The only comfort for the young girl was her elder brother Tal’s companionship and affection. Together the two sibling managed to scrape by for a few years. Until during an attempt to steal food they were spotted. Fleeing from the pursuing stall vendors Yseult fell. Crying out for Tal she watched as he turned back only for a moment before leaving her to their pursuers’ mercy. That night and most of the next day she laid crying in an alley bruised and betrayed. Yseult may have let herself, die in that rundown alleyway, had it not been for a passing street urchin. The child walking past her, simply laughed. This was the last straw for her, in a fit of rage she snatched up a loose stone and used it to crack open the laughing boy’s head.

Those events changed the girl dramatically. Learning how harsh and cold the world could be, numbed her emotionally. As the years passed Yseult found herself running with a gang. Her coldness and desire to live, led her to be an effective killer. So much so that she found herself as the leader of gang’s enforcer. She remained with the gang for many years. Until the gang started getting sloppy with many of the members being linked to crimes, including the leader. Disgusted with them she turned on them killing most. Taking those with bounties on them to the authority. She turned out quite a profit along with what the gang had acquired over the years.

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Umbra

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Your points check out, with none left over. Normally, I'd approve you right here.

HOWEVER

Because I approved Joscelin, your other character, no less than four days ago, I'm going to be a bit tougher on you this time, since you're so impatient.

1. Four very choppy sentences do not constitute a Personality. Add more to it, and clean it up. I know you can write better than this.

2. Run a spell check on this app. I'm seeing many grammatical errors in places where the sentence starts with "While," but doesn't list anything countering the bad/good being described in that sentence. Fix that.

Also remember that after this character gets approved, you can't submit any more characters, unless you buy another character slot for...I think it was 150 rupees. If this is really what you want, I'm not stopping you, but I'm just saying to think these things through before you make rash decisions.

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Yseult

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Alright I believe I have dealt with the problems.

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Umbra

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Eh, looks fine to me.

Approved. Have fun!

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Archetype: Blademaster

Strength + 1
Striking + 2
Defensive Combat + 2
Potions + 2

Nationality: Hyrulean

Stats
  • Strength: 3 (Archtype + 1)
  • Agility: 2
  • Intelligence: 3 ( Race +1)
  • Magic: 2
  • Charisma: 2
Skills
Total = 35
  • Striking: 4 (-7 exp)
  • Brawling: 0
  • Endurance: 3 ( -6 exp)
  • Athletics: 0
  • Ranged Combat: 0
  • Defensive Combat: 4 ( -7 exp)
  • Medicine: 0
  • Puzzles: 2 ( -3 exp)
  • Spells: 0
  • Casting: 0
  • Potions: 2
  • Magical Item Use: 0
  • Sincerity: 0
  • Inspiration: 0
  • Natural Affinity: 0
Perks and Flaws

Flaws:
Frail (+ 2)

Perks:
Rich ( -3)
Iconic Item ( -4) Lesser- Gilded Sword
Dual Wielding ( -7)


Total = 0





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